Recieved feedback

General negative comments:

- Not enough roses
- Too much lip syncing
- Colour correcting needed
- Delete Rory smiling
- Slower eye closing at the end
- Cut lyrics to images
- Lip syncing out of time in places
- Footage quality
- Order of Rory drinking in the pub
- Avoid repeated clips

General positive comments:

- Good lip syncing and narrative
- Good locations and back grounds
- Good shots and framing
- Refreshing to see a story
- Love the montage in the middle
- Good slow motion - adds effect
- Good variation
- Highlights dramatic effect