- 25, Level 3
- The camera was too blurry.
- Actress smiled at camera and came out of character, this ruined the effect of a sad girl.
- However it was a good storyline and the singer fit the part extremely well, it look as if it was his real voice the whole time.
- Some shots are not controlled (out of focus).
- Clear narrative with shooting material appropriate to the viewer.
- A lot of the shots included the 'artists' back, meaning lip syncing was missed and it looked like the 'artist' has their back to the camera/audience.
- Not a variety of shots - could have been more tracking/panning shots.
- The artist could have been more enthusiast during his performance - a lot of it was just him standing still playing his guitar.
- The images/shots were appropriate for the viewer.
- Not too many effects used, however this matched the pace of the song.
East of Eden-
- 35, Level 4
- Amazing editing skills.
- Horses/unicorns added an interesting effect and made me more intrigued.
- Great reverse shots.
- The singer in the pool was random and I felt it was unneeded as I did not see the point of her being in there and what it represented.
Bad Romance-
- 21, Level 3
- Should not have chosen a well known song that already has a music video as you will never be able to be as soon and raise up to the expectations presented.
- The singer did not fit the part.
- Looked unnatural.
- Cringy.
- However the editing techniques were quite interesting but good.
- Guitar was not appropriate for the song. This means some of the visuals were not matching of the lyrics.
- Lip syncing was not always adequate for such a powerful song.
- Props and costumes were clever, matching the genre and the artists usual image.
- I liked how the shots weren't repeated a lot, meaning you were always wondering what was going to be the next scene.
- Effects with the cloning were clever.
- Camera shots were not always controlled.
- Was creative.
Dull boy-
- 32, Level 4
- Synergy with the colour purple.
- Good use of editing to add in purple to the lights and backgrounds.
- Great cuts and nice reverse shots.
- Good storyline, drew the audience in.
- Not always controlled use of the camera, for example at the beginning there was a out of focus/jumpy tracking shot.
- Editing with the pink/purple was clever.
- Images were appropriate for the genre.
- Variety of shots.
Donnelly&Vans de Zande -
- 39/40
- Content/visuals appropriate for the genre.
- Controlled use of camera.
- Cloning edit for clever.
- The transitions between the shots were clever.
- Close attention to mise en scene.
- The transition between people around the dinner table to mannequins was clever.
I Kissed a Boy -
- 35/40
- Visuals were appropriate for the lyrics.
- A large variety of shots used.
- Controlled use of camera.
- Editing was clever with over laying shots and with the ghostly effects.
- I liked how every so often it was flicker to colour imaginary.
- Could have been more locations used as was quite predictable.
- Visual pace matched the music's pace.
- Mise en scene could have been more adventurous.
- I liked how it was edited in black and white as it matches the vibe of the music.




